Okay, so Alex and I obviously like make money online and stuff, and we also teach people how to as well. But one of his students was sending him like an update voice memo...

Reel·49s·veröffentlicht 11.09.26 (vor 1 Monat)·erfasst 17.09.26

0,5×^*Faktor (Views / Median 282.850, n=27)

154.240Views

2.280Likes

47Kommentare

Talking Head + B-RollFallstudie / ProofHook: story einstieg45-90sProduktion: rohCTA: kommentar keywordKonfidenz mittel

Warum es so läuft

Der Post lief mit Faktor 0.55x deutlich unterdurchschnittlich für diesen Account. Der Hook ist ein raw, roher FaceTime-artiger Erzähleinstieg über eine dritte Person (Freundin eines Freundes), was den Bezug zur Zuschauerin vermutlich verwässert. Die Caption enthält eine sehr lange Textwand mit mehreren CTAs (Kommentar-Keywords, Link in Bio, Masterclass), was vermutlich als zu verkaufslastig wirkt. Die B-Roll zeigt nur Handy-Chats und Laptop-Szenen ohne starken visuellen Beweis wie Screenshots von Kontoständen.

Belege

Ausreißer-Faktor 0.55x, also unter Account-Median
Hook erzählt über eine dritte Person statt direkte Ansprache der Zuschauerin
Lange Caption mit drei verschiedenen CTAs gleichzeitig
B-Roll zeigt nur generische Chat-Screenshots ohne konkrete Zahlen im Bild
Machart raw_yapping-artig, roh, wenig Schnitt laut Kontaktbogen

Hook

„Okay, so Alex and I obviously like make money online and stuff, and we also teach people how to as well. But one of his students was sending him like an update voice memo...“

Titel-/Hook-Muster

Anekdote + Zahl (Schülerin verdient 20k) als Beweis

Für Sabrina

Sabrina könnte in einem natürlichen Talking-Head-Reel beim Kaffee eine kurze, konkrete Erfolgsgeschichte einer Kundin aus ihrer Sales-Leadership-Arbeit erzählen, aber mit klarem Fokus auf einer einzigen Zahl und einem einzigen CTA statt mehrerer gleichzeitig.

Thema

Kundenerfolg in High-Ticket-Sales-Ausbildung

Sichtbar

eine Person spricht direkt in Handykamera, FaceTime-Optik
Nahaufnahme Gesicht mit Lachen und Emotion
B-Roll Handbild mit Smartphone und Chat-Nachrichten
Laptop und Kaffeetasse im Hintergrund sichtbar
zweite Szene zeigt Person am Laptop im Wohnzimmer
kein sichtbarer Untertitel im Kontaktbogen erkennbar

saleshigh_ticketerfolgsgeschichteproofcoachingfaceTime_style

Analyse 17.09., 08:29 · claude-sonnet-5

Kontaktbogen (8 Standbilder, zeilenweise; Zeitpunkte: 0.4s, 9.9s, 15.9s, 19.8s, 29.7s, 33.1s, 39.6s, 42.5s)

Verlauf

Messung	Alter	Views	Likes	Komm.	Label
17.09., 08:26	5.4 d	154.240	2.280	47	t0

t0 = erste Erfassung, t7 = etwa 7 Tage, t28 = etwa 28 Tage nach Veröffentlichung.

Notiz

Caption

Emily if u see this u killed it girl $20k your first month in high ticket sales is only a reflection of all your hard work you put into the training im so proud of u 7 years ago I was a barista at a coffee shop making $8/hr. I knew I was a hard worker but wasn’t getting paid for it. I got into sales bc they promised me “f*ck u money” haha. While I did make the”f*ck you money”, yanno I bought my dream cars, house etc.. none of that holds a candle to the feeling of control I got by learning sales. You get what you put in. For the first time in my life if I wanted to work extra hard one month I would directly make more money. got addicted to the game & you will too. Since then I’ve built the #1 women’s high ticket sales academy @shesellsacademy & put on the #1 women’s wealth conference @womenandwealthcon My life is only measured by how many other lives I can change through skillset and helping you guys make money. If any of this resonated with you, follow along and watch sales transform the way you think about life <3 Comment “CLASS” to get trained by Shelby. Comment “COACH” if you’re a high ticket coach wanting to hire @shesellsacademy certified closers. Want to get trained by me directly on how to make money in sales? Next free masterclass rsvp date in bio. Spots limited. & feel free to stalk around the student testimonials highlight while u at it.

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Okay, so Alex and I obviously like make money online and stuff, and we also teach people how to as well. But one of his students was sending him like an update voice memo, and he was like, "Also, my girlfriend joined Shelby's sales company, and now she's making 20K a month." Listen. Might think it's cool. So first of all, Emily, my wife, she's in freaking lockstep with Shelby right now. Like she finished her graduate exam like faster-- I mean, there's a timeframe that you can only do it in a certain timeframe. She got it done like the, the soonest that she possibly humanly could. Um, so she's gonna be tracking like freaking 20 bands her first month and, and with Shelby, uh, doing high-ticket closing, so that's freaking insane. This is also what we do at midnight. Don't look at that.